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« Reply #30 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 02:51am »

Troy nodded. "Do you have any plans for today or tomorrow morning?"
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« Reply #31 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 02:55am »

The mugger simply answered "No,".
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« Reply #32 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 04:32am »

Well good. Makes this easier. "Then when I let go, you will wake up, pick up your gun and put it away, go to the homeless shelter and take a long nap, unable to wake up until the morning. When you do wake up, you will be unable to remember entering this alley today or anything that happened afterwards, including meeting us. You will never use your gun for personal gain, and you will try to sell it for some extra money. Do you understand?"
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« Reply #33 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 04:34am »

The mugger's subconsciously memorized all of the instructions that were given to him and after Troy asked, he answered with a nod "Yes,".
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« Reply #34 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 04:39am »

"You won't notice the two of us here in the alley with you when you wake up, either," added Troy. With that, he let go of the mugger's shoulder and backed up to stand next to Fiona as he watched the mugger obey his instructions.
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« Reply #35 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 04:44am »

After Troy let go of the mugger's shoulder, the man just looked around confused before he went over to his gun, picked it up, put it away, and walked out of the alley quietly.
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« Reply #36 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 04:56am »

Troy smirked as he watched him leave, and waited a few more seconds before turning to Fiona. "What do you mean you were experimented on? How long ago was this?"

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« Reply #37 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 05:05am »

((Night. ^^))

Fiona answered him monotonously, still under Troy's power, "My DNA was altered in some way so that I would have 'powers' that they wanted in a soldier. This was 78 years ago,".
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« Reply #38 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 12:26pm »

Troy blinked. 78 years ago? But she looked like she was in her early 20s, not much older than himself. That must have been one of the 'powers'... but just to be sure, he asked, "What 'powers' do you have, exactly?"
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« Reply #39 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 5:27pm »

Fiona answered, "I have super strength, immortality, and hypnotism,".
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« Reply #40 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 5:31pm »

"Hyp-hypnotism?" Troy stammered, surprised by this answer. Then again, was he expecting a certain answer? "How... exactly... does your hypnosis power work?" he asked slowly, still trying to understand everything she's been saying so far.
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« Reply #41 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 5:40pm »

Fiona answered him "My hypnosis works when people stare into my eyes. However, I cannot actually stop my eyes from hypnotizing anyone. I can only prevent it by wearing sunglasses,".
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« Reply #42 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 8:34pm »

Ohhh... that would explain the blind act, so she could wear sunglasses all the time and stop people from being hypnotized. He wondered cautiously... "Who else knows about this?"
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« Reply #43 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 8:36pm »

Fiona answered "No one else knows about this,".
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« Reply #44 on: Dec 2nd, 2012, 8:47pm »

(Another tip... try not to be redundant. Many times I've noticed you using the same word in your writing... sometimes it's 'then', and now it seems to be 'answered'... it's can be a little funny (if done on purpoes), but at the same time, a tip for good writing would be to try to use different words and change up the sentence structures. Makes it kinda boring if all the narration is saying is "she said," "he said," "she said," "he said," etc. with no synonyms for 'said'. Get it?)

This got Troy thinking. Maybe he should do something else with Fiona other than keep her hypnotized. That was when he realized: the time! Fiona was missing work because of this. Albiet it hasn't been that long, but he couldn't keep her away from work like this. He got an idea. "Fiona, when we leave this alley, you will wake up and forget everything that happened until just before you felt the gun on you. Before I leave you at where you work, you will feel a slight urge to want to see me after work, and you will give me some way to contact you. Finally if I snap my fingers you will fall back into this deep trance. Do you understand everything?"
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