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« Thread started on: Oct 26th, 2012, 12:46pm »

It's quiet. Well, it's the dead of night and there are no parties going on, so that's kind of a good thing.

Besides, the only noise I want right now is this iPod. Maybe if I listen to it I'll be able to shut myself up inside for once...

This house is a bit small, and I'm kind of too old for this, but I pretend the entrance/office/formal dining room area is a ballroom anyway. I walk out of the hallway into it in my gown. My nightgown, anyway. That's probably the most real part of my fantasy, the fact that I'm wearing something in that vein of clothing. He's the only one I'd usually wear one for... But I don't want to think about him too much. I'll miss him. So I continue my daydream.

With a lovely English rendition of the waltz version of Daughter of Evil, I step out into the room and twirl around. In reality, it's rather pitiful, only vaugely resembling the act of a spacey girl dancing on her own, but in my mind it's beautiful. Not too gaudy, though, just the right touch of elegance to the setting or it'd all be thrown off balance. At least in reality the music itself is pretty.

Once upon a time in a country far away
Where a lot of crimes were committed every day
There was a young lady fourteen years of age
Crowned as the queen, dancing on history's stage...


I push down the inevitable feeling of silliness and frivolity that arises. I'm allowed to have some fun occasionally, even if I'm no less lonely because of it. I continue to spin around to the beat, wishing again he was here.

She bought her luxuries, spending without heed
A servant with the same face coming to her every need
Josephine's the name of her royal steed
She had everything one could ever want, indeed


Thinking about him is inevitable too, I suppose, so I decide to get it over with. It's not that I don't like him. Actually, I adore him, probably the only person I've ever really been able to say that about in... that way. I've adored him since we had barely started school. Always for who he is, if nothing else. I can't say he's particularly handsome, nor ugly. But he's smart, and kind, and somewhat shy, and has a sarcastic side, but if he was perfect, I'd have become bored of him. Who knows if he'd really dance with me now? At least, without too much hesitation? I wouldn't give it a second thought myself, but with him you can never tell. But ah well, I'm all alone now. And besides, knowing how we get along, I'd have probably taxed him too much already by trying to divert his attention to something even more frivolous than dancing.

"We are short on money, but I want a diamond ring
Squeeze out every penny from the peasant's savings
Anybody standing up against the queen's commands
Will be sent to the guillotine on command!"


The muted blare of the TV from the other room is starting to really warp all this now. I suppose I'll go back to reality and turn it off and put things away for the night soon. It's no less than I deserve, doing stupid things like this and pretending I'm something I'm not.

Dreadful rose of sin, you bloom in dread alone
Shining in scarlet, sending chills to the bone
Pathetic weeds growing on the soil around
O shall wither and die without making a sound


It's a shame, I like the ballroom, even though it did make me a little lonely.
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« Reply #1 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 02:21am »

...aww...this is beautiful...

Curse your better writing abilities than mine...
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« Reply #2 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 02:27am »

That's so nice of you to say! Thank you! smiley

This is just something I wrote at 11:00 last night while I was really sentimental and went out and pretended to dance for a little while. So I guess the secret to good writing is feeling.
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« Reply #3 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 02:45am »

Mhmmm...I guess I write more when I'm in a happy, peppy mood. Not really when I'm depressed.

But just using that song won me over...
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« Reply #4 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 03:36am »

I guess it depends. I write when I'm feeling lonely or inspired or wishful, for instance. And just imagine what Edgar Allen Poe must have felt like when HE wrote. ._.

Have you heard that version? It's amazing.
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« Reply #5 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 04:00am »

I know...SO BEAUTIFUL.
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« Reply #6 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 04:08am »

And before Ivan riffs at us or whatever for liking "robots that sing", you and I can both attest to the fact that the lady who sang that not only wasn't Rin, she sounded AMAZING.
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« Reply #7 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 04:19am »

Mhmmm!

AND IT DOESNT MATTER IF THEY ARE ROBOTS! THEY'RE STILL LIKE HUMANS, WITH FEELINGS AND VOICES THAT MAKE THEM NO DIFFERENT TO PEOPLE!
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« Reply #8 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 04:26am »

At least, some of the newer ones like the Kagamines or Gakupo. Miku and Meiko and Kaito seem to have difficulty singing with emotion, comparitively anyway.
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« Reply #9 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 2:22pm »

Dark!Miku can...and Rin with her brother, or on her own is pretty good...

I'm not a big Luka fan. I do like Gakupo though...eggplants~!
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« Reply #10 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 3:01pm »

I think it's cool how Luka is bilingual, though. ^^
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« Reply #11 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 3:16pm »

True...she sings English better than the rest of the Vocaloids. Only the Utaus have her beat on that.

Gumi's probably the most "robotic" sounding of the Vocaloids...
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« Reply #12 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 3:53pm »

Speaking of Utaus, TETO BEATS ALL. XD

I haven't really listened to Gumi much, but if she's going to be singing Wrath then she can't sound too robotic, can she?
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« Reply #13 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 9:00pm »

TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO, TETO...

10 Faced Me sounds pretty good...
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« Reply #14 on: Oct 27th, 2012, 9:32pm »

Watashi Kasane territory! cheesy

Never heard of it, but I'll give it a look soon.
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