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« Thread started on: Apr 18th, 2012, 3:30pm »

(finland is a girl in this version,king is Scandinavia,two baltic and other nordics are princes,belarus is evil queen)

Once upon a time in a far away land there lived a king ,named Scandinavia,who had seven children . There were six princes and a princess Finland . Their belowed mother died of illness after finlands birth. King ruled the kingdom with wisdom and justice. All seven children had great time playing together,reading books ,dancing, listenning to nurses stories. One day, after Finlands tenth birtday, king decide to go on a hunting. He rode with his horse and faitfull hunters on a hunt for wild animals. They came across with wild board ,who ran away,while king and hunters were shooting it with arrows . Scandinavia followed the injured creature all the way to a strange forest,far away from a castle. King determent to catch it,rode after him and he didnt hear what one of his hunters said: ,, Wait your higness. You are too fast. Its too dangerous! ,,
But Scandinavia rode so fast,that his hunters couldn`t keep up with him and were left behind. After a few moments king found himself lost. Sudennly he hit a low branch and fell from horses back. Horse,who was scared to death ran away,while king stood up and started looking for a way out of this forest. He walked and walked,but he couldn`t find the way out. After three hours of walking he found himself in a clearing of the forest. There was a tree stump and Scandinavia sat on it to take a small rest before trying to find way out of the forest.
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« Reply #1 on: Apr 27th, 2012, 6:57pm »

While he was sitting,he thought that finding a way out of the forest wont be easy. His thought was inturupted by a voice saying: ,, Do you need help,sir? ,,
King turned and not far from him there stood a beautyfull lady with short blond hair with silver headband and blue eyes. She wore a beautifull green dress with long sleeves and held a wand trimeled with strange simbols. He stood up and said. : ,, Yes,kind lady. I`m lost and i can`t find the way out. Can you help me and in return i will give what you wish. ,,
Encentrance thought a little, before she said: ,, I`ve been living here for many years. I will show you the way, if you promies to marry my sister. ,,
king was supriesed and said: ˝but i havent met her.˝
Encantres poined her wand at the nearby trees and there stood a shining castle. The door opened and out came a beautifull girl with platinum blond hair and dark blue eyes. She bowed before king and as he looked in her eyes, he was shocked. The girls eyes were cold and filled with dark power. Scandinavia promies to marry enchanters sister Belarus and enchantres showed him the way out of forest. After king arrived at his castle,he married Belarus and made her his queen. After the wedding and royal feast,he introdused his queen to his seven children . All chridren were scared and quiet,even as Belarus came to them.
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« Reply #2 on: May 5th, 2012, 1:03pm »

All seven children left the throne room. Belarus wached children leaving throne room with evil smile on her beautifull face. King sensed that will be something wrong and he vas worried bout his children`s safety. That night king couldnt sleep,so he decide to write some letters in his study.
Meanwile Belarus took a twig and with her dark power,she turned it into large snake It slitered pass the study and scandinavia stood from his chair and went to childrens bedroom, hopping to come in time.

As he entered in bedroom , snake was already in and was slowly leaning to princess. King screamed : ,, Finland,wake up! Wake up! ,,
Princess slowly woke up and as she saw snake leaning closer to her,she screamed in fear and ran to her father. Finlands screamed woke princes up and Latvia screamed as snake turned to him : ,, Leave me allone! Help ! ,,
Scandinavia called to his children: ,, Everyove come to me . ,,
He turned to snake who hissed to princes and drooped a vase on her tail : ,, take this you , horrible hissing twig. ,,
As snake turned to him and finland ,they both ran out of the room and serpent followed them until corner. Then from nowhere came came guards and started shooting errows at serpent. It broke the window and escapeted to forest. Scandiavia returned to childrens room with finland walking close to him and shievering. King turned to his children and asked: ,, Are you all right? ,,
lithvania answered : ,, We are all right. How did serpent get in castle? ,,
Norway was supriesed: ,, I checked the door and closed the window. ,,
king looked at his children,they were safe and sound. He was still worried about their safety. He said to his children . ,, You can`t stay in this castle, it is too dangereous. Tommorow i will take you to our castle in the forest, where you will be safe. ,,
Nobody knew that queen was waching them behind the door and heard everything king said . The next morning king and his seven children rode into forest. They used magic spindle,that enchatres had given Scandinavia many years ago. Finland folowed spindle,while her father and princes rode after her. While they were riding to castle king saixd to his princes: ,, You will be safe,because nowbody knows the way to the castle . Not even belarus wont find you. I will be the only one who will visit you. ,,

After they finnaly arrived to the castle,king said goodbey to his children and made them promiese to protect one another. Everyone promiesd and waiwed goodbey as Scandiavia rode back to his castle.
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« Reply #3 on: Jul 26th, 2012, 7:13pm »

meanwhile in the castle

Belarus went to a small room with candles .She lit the candles and said on small chair. She used her magic wand and with dark power,she turned it into magic needle. With her needle she seewed seven white shirts and during her work she mumbled her evil spell :

Abra cadabra
Abra cadabra
there are new things
arms become wings
Cygnus,Cygnus
there are new things
arms become wings


After she finished her work,Belarus laughted with evil laughter . She wanted to rule the kingdom ,so she made a plan to get rid of her stepchildren. Queen took the shirts and blew the candles flames. The smoke created a swan. Then she went to look for king. after one hour,she saw him entering in royal cabinet. She came to a bit open door and saw king hiding a spindle behind a shield on wall. After king left the study,evil queen went to her room.
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« Reply #4 on: Jul 27th, 2012, 05:15am »

Two days latter,when Scandinavia went hunting ,Belarus took the spindle and seven magic shirts . She put a cape on herself and hide her face with hood. Queen came to the forest and with magic spindle,she came to the castle. Six princes saw someone coming and thought that it was their father. Finland finished with making soup,when she acidentlly dropped the cauoldron and the soup spilled on the floor.
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« Reply #5 on: Jul 27th, 2012, 07:26am »

While Finland was mopping the floor, her six brother saw that the person who came to the castle was no other then the queen. Belarus threw seven magic shirts on princes,who tried to run away. As the shirts touched them,they turned into swans. Belarus looked at six swans and said before she returned to castle with one magic shirt left : ˝ With this,kingdom belongs to me. I will rule it all by myself.˝
In her haste,she fogot to count the swans.
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« Reply #6 on: Jul 27th, 2012, 2:45pm »

After Finland was finished with mopping,she ran to see who was outside . As she came outside the castle door,she saw six white swans flying into the sky. Princess called her brothers,but there were nowhere to be found. She decided to look for them and went in to the wood.
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« Reply #7 on: Jul 27th, 2012, 5:12pm »

Finland walked and walked deeper in forest. Then just before nightfall,the storm clouds came and it started raining. Sudenlly there was a storm .
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« Reply #8 on: Jul 28th, 2012, 08:53am »

Poor Finland was scared,but she went on. She wanted to find her brothers. She walked until she couldnt walk anymore. She lay down by the tree and fell asleep.
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« Reply #9 on: Aug 16th, 2012, 10:16am »

The next morning finland woke up and sat up. She said with sigh : ˝Oh,my brothers. Were are you? ˝
Then she heard some noise and follow it until she came to small lake.There were six swans swiming .
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« Reply #10 on: Aug 16th, 2012, 10:52am »

Finland sat on bank and said : ˝My brothers.Is it really you? ˝
norway swam to finland and said:˝ Yes,dear sister . It is us.˝
Latvia told her about Belarus`s evil spell.
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« Reply #11 on: Aug 16th, 2012, 1:13pm »

Lithulvania turned to their sister: ˝ it will be hard to break the spell. For six years you wont be allow to say a word or laugh out loud . During that time you must sew six shirts from thistle . If you speak only a single word,your work will worth nothing. ˝
Finland vowed to save her brothers by sewing six shirts and keeping her silence.
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« Reply #12 on: Aug 18th, 2012, 1:59pm »

She watched and wawed goodbey as her brothers flew with others swans. Finland called after them: ˝You can count on me.I promiese that i will be waiting!˝
Then she went to pick thistle for the shirts. girl found it and picked it for a whole basket . She took the basket to a tree and started her work.
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« Reply #13 on: Sep 23rd, 2012, 3:57pm »

A year passed since finland started to sew six shirts. Although she was silent,she had animal friends. Birds sang beautifull songs and animals brought berries for silent girl to eat . Finland decided to leave her home,so that evil queen wont find her .
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« Reply #14 on: Sep 23rd, 2012, 6:41pm »

Two years passed and finland continued with her work,keeping the vow of silence . She found a tree with bick crack,were she spent the winter. Everyday,she went to pick the thistle and some berries.
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